I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs Egan.
Hi Sharee,We loved your introduction because you told us about yourself and what you want to do when you are older. Maybe next time you should add a little more colour and a background to your Writing.By Jade & Dannielle
Thank you for your advice. I will try to make it more colourful.
Hi Sharee,We loved your introduction because you told us about yourself and what you want to do when you are older. Maybe next time you should add a little more colour and a background to your Writing.
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Thank you for your advice. I will try to make it more colourful.
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